HI IM PUHITAI AND IN ROOM 3 WE HAD TO WRITE A TWENTY SENTENCE STORY AND HERES MINE. WE HAD TO HIGHLIGHT THE SENTENCES EITHER GREEN OR YELLOW.
YELLOW IS A COMPOUND SENTENCE AND GREEN IS SIMPLE SENTENCE. BUT I DIDNT HIGHLIGHT ON BLOG BYEE
Once upon a time, there lived a dangerous boy named Puhitai. He was arrested for 1st-degree murder and assault. He was sentenced to 35 years in prison and was not allowed to contact his family. He was put with the worst people of all in the entire prison. Puhitai was thrown in C block with Awa the amazing and Poppy the purifier. As soon as Puhitai got thrown in Poppy threw a rock directly towards Puhitai’s head. Awa stepped in front of the rock but failed to block it in its path, but Puhitai caught the rock and threw it straight towards Poppy while he was laying on the floor. Poppy groaned with pain when the rock hit her right on her head, she wanted to kill him for that, but she couldn’t. Every plan she made would fail because the plan was either terrible or Puhitai was just too smart to let his guard down. Then one day she took it so far she stuck a knife in his sheet and in his pillowcase so that when he lay to sleep he would be stabbed and die of blood loss. It was night and Puhitai was beginning to feel tired so he threw his bag onto his bed, but to his surprise, he heard a peculiar sound when his bag hit the bed. Puhitai walked over to his bed and lifted his bag, he had found a knife stuck in the bottom so he slept on the floor. Before he went to lie on the ground he noticed a strange shape in his pillow-case, but it looked familiar, the shape resembles a knife he thought, and he wasn’t wrong. By the time he reached the pillow, he immediately knew who tried to murder him, Poppy. So he made a surprise for Poppy, and it was a BIG ONE. Puhitai prepared for morning and drifted off to sleep, but after he checked his bed of course.
As Poppy began to wake she saw a murderer looking down at her with two knives in its hands. The frightened woman said in a scared voice do it then stab me. The murderer had no hesitation and murdered her before she died he took off his mask and said thanks for the idea , and these cool knives.
Hi Puhitai. Great story and choice of the story line. It really puts you on the edge of your seat! Perhaps next time you could add some punctuation in some places.
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